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Re: My People
Hey Slushy! I thought this story was really cool. In a cat's point of view, right? I might be being a bit biased because I'm absolutely IN LOVE with cats ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 1:
Heya Serene! Here to review as promised :) I'll start off with what I liked about this chapter and I guess that's just to do with it carries on nicely ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :The Introduction:
Hi Serene! Here to review as asked, sorry it's taken me a while. Okay so what I really loved about this piece was more to do with the first half ...
Aug 24, 2013 -
Re: Beauty Lies In The Eyes Of Love
Poem 4 of 4! Right, so let's just crack right on with this review, and as always let me start with what I liked about it. I hate to repeat ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: My Heart Flies Away
Oh look, it's me again :P I really liked this! Something which I noticed here which I did not in the previous poems I've read of yours is the commas ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 2 ( Service Of Love )
Hey again Leo! So with the positives of this poem, I'm going to mention something I mentioned last time and I think the language used is really nice! Although it ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 1 ( My Only Love)
Hiya Leo! Here to review as asked~ So I've recently kind of had this revelation that I don't completely hate poetry. Well I didn't hate it as such, but I ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Faking Perfect
Hey, Change! Here to review your story. What I really liked about this was that rather than a story, it seemed more like a message was trying to be sent ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: No Way Out Prologue
Hi Giselle! Here to review this prologue- So this was a pretty good read, I think the best thing about it was it's very intriguing and and not really something ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: Pain
Hiya Ari! I'm so glad you've tried out poetry! I shall start of my review with the things I liked about this piece and that's more about the message of ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: It's Raining Men
Hiya Ziggs! Because I liked your last piece of flash fiction so much, and this was looking a bit shy of reviews, I thought I'd take a look at this! ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: Humanity
Hiya ariana! I remember reviewing some of your lyrics in the past, and I think this is my favourite thing of yours I've read so far. Although quite short for ...
Aug 22, 2013 -
Re: In the Mind of a Loon
Hiya fictionfan! Here to review your story~ What really drew me to this was the title because I've always been a fan of stories that are in the perspective of ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: Out of Reach
Hiya Deanie! I was looking for something to review for today, and because you're awesome I thought I'd take a shot at this! You probably already know that reviewing poetry ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: The Capital
Hi teddy! I thought this was a really cool story, and the whole having animals as characters idea is really cute. Usually with animals as characters it can get a ...
Aug 18, 2013
