ArcticMonkey

Hey Benjamin! So I've never actually been a big fan of pirates really, but even I can't not say that this wasn't cool. I think cool is my best word ...

Hi density! What I liked most about this piece was that it's really current. I know a few people who have had similar problems due to facebook or other social ...

Hey Anna! Here to review your poem~ I thought this was quite cute, not in a patronising way but it left me with a smile once I read the last ...

Hi rishabh! I'm here to review this chapter, sorry I haven't reviewed previous ones but I have actually kind of been reading them whenever I see them in the green ...

Hiya Candid! I will be reviewing your piece today, but I'm sorry to say that I haven't actually read my previous chapters, but nonetheless this piece needed saving from the ...

Hi Aquila! I'm sorry for not having reviewed the previous parts, but you say you're trying to flesh out your characters so I'll be sure to make some comments on ...

Hi Robbie! I'm sorry to say that I haven't read/reviewed the previous chapters, but I kind of skimmed over them but apologies if I get anything wrong. Later on I ...

Hi Abi, the black plague has come to invade your work! (representing the review team, black plague) I'll start off this review by talking about the things I liked, then ...

Straaaaaaaaange! I actually adored this so much. I think it's really the message and the last line that really does it for me as a really cool poem. It might ...

fortis! I don't think I've ever reviewed any of your work on here before! well there's a first time for everything ;). Anyways, I shall start off my review with ...

Hiya Alora! I see you're new, so welcome to YWS :D Okay, so I thought this was really good. When I first starting reading this I could see the romance ...

Hi Erza, happy review day! I thought the idea behind this poem was pretty cool. I'll try and not be over analytical and more critical, but what I'm getting from ...

Hi Joe! Here to review your poem- So I think this is one of those cases where simplicity just has to win. When reading this I got that 'feel-good' summery ...

Hi writersdream! Okay so I really liked the concept of all of this. I mean, people always find themselves talking to their reflection in the mirror, but to have it ...

Hi Dmytra! Here to review as promised, So what I liked about this poem was the imagery and descriptions you've used. They sounded really nice and were really good at ...