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Re: Core Cities Chapter 6
Hi! I have read portions of your book, and I noticed that this was stuck in the Green Room. So I came to save it! Plus, the very beginning paragraph ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 4: (part 1)
Hi, it's Aravis here to review! I haven't read all your chapters so I will try not to focus too much on plot that I don't know about. Good things: ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 29 Part 1
Hi, Aravis here to review! Happy Review Day! I have not read your other chapters, but I will still try to give you a helpful review. :) As I have ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 3)
Hi Buggie! Aravis, here to review! Happy Review Day! I haven't read your other chapters (though I might after this review) but I will still try to give you a ...
Nov 30, 2014 -
Re: Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Four)
Hi! Aravis, here for a review! I have not read your other chapters, but I will try to give you a helpful review! So let's read this puppy. I'll start ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Glow- Chapter Three
Hi! Aravis here to review, representing the Wicked Squids! WARNING: I have not read your previous chapters. But I will still try to give you a helpful review without asking ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: ...
Hhi! Aravis here to review, representing the Wicked Squids! WARNING: I have not read your previous chapters. But I will still try to give you a helpful review and not ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 30
Welp, since I reviewed Ch. 28 today I thought to myself, "Why not just review this one too?" But you don't care about my reasons for reviewing, you just want ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 28
Hi! Aravis here to review, representing the Wicked Squids!!!!! WARNING: I have not read the rest of your book. But I will try to give a helpful review anyway, without ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: Cafeinnated Dreams
Hi! Aravis here to review, representing the Wicked Squids! This was a very intriguing start to a story, although very, very short. (Therefore this review will probably be super short) ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: Streams of Futility - Chapter 2
Hi! Aravis here to review, representing the Wicked Squids! WARNING: I have not read your previous chapter. But I will try to give you a helpful review anyway without asking ...
Oct 26, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 90 [Or, The End] (Revised)
Aravis, here to review! Happy Review Day! I must warn you that I have not read the rest of your chapters, and the end is probably not the best place ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: A short tale for Christmas (edited, yet not all mistakes corrected)
Hey Duncan! Aravis, here to review! Happy Review Day! (though it is night for me ;) ) Good things: I like that you created your characters and your story line ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Secret Service page #5
Hi! Aravis here representing team Reviewing is the New Black. I will warn you that I have not read your other pages, but I will try to give you a ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 7.2: Not Ceased His Rampage
It is indeed still in the Green Room. Therefore I am back! Woah. This chapter with both parts is really long. I likes this part more than the part before. ...
Aug 31, 2014