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could you define distill please? : ) Thanks for the advice btw

Hello! I thought that I would add my two cents worth. I liked this poem. Is it written from a personal experience?

This is an amazing tribute to your friend. It is so beautiful.

Thanks for the critic. For anyone who is curious about the title, it's rough latin for "peace of the light". :D

Good story. I was a bit confussed with a serg. giving a lietenant orders, but it was a good story overall.

Great job1 I had tread OMAM last semester for my English class. It is a great book!

Were you meaning for this poem not to rhyme? I like the message, but i was just curious of the lack of rhyme.

I liked it! :elephant: I'm going to e-mail it to my boyfriend for Valentines Day, with your permission.

August 7, 2006 Dear Diary, RAT week is sooo hard! At six each morning the cadre run down the stoop, banging on the windows and doors! Then we fall-out in ...

Preatty good. Tweak it a bit. :wink:

I liked the subject of the poem, but your word choices didn;t exactly ryme. Keep the subject and tweek the words.

That is so funny :lol: I can't stop laughing! :P

Would some person out there please read and comment on my poem! :P

I am in awe! Great poem :smt023 !

I liked the subject matter, but in the third stanza, the ryming was off. Good poem though. :smt023