AquaMarine

I have not read the books OR seen the movie, but I already don't like themI don't like how everyone calls you crazy if you haven't read them, and INSANE ...

Hey, El! I've read this poem a few times very recently, trying to decide if I liked it or not. It didn't stand out to me as something I loved; ...

Hi! As requested: Stories like this are very sweet. They're not so much stories, actually, as small personal tales. The trick is to get a good balance between the emotion ...

Hi! I like the overall poem, and the way you portray the character throughout. However, my main sticking point would be the rhyme scheme. It's not too bad, and definitely ...

Hi, LPR. This is about Cassie by Flyleaf, right? I've heard about the story. So, I'm not too sure where to start with this. My reviews tend to become a ...

Hi, Hobbit! (Awesome username.) This poem is ... okay. It's good some good points, and some bad points. The good point is that there is quite a bit of raw ...

Hi there! This is a pretty hard topic to write about, and I think you've actually done it extremely well. What I do love is that it's very simple. You ...

Hiya, Eddie! Okay, so, a maths (not math , psh.) poem! Nice. You certainly pick interesting topics for your poem, and this one I like. I do, however, think that ...

Hi there! Firstly, if you are planning on posting more of this, why don't you turn it into a novel on YWS? Take a look at your prologue, and there ...

Hey there! I like the message you have in this poem. It's a good one, and pretty original, which I like. However, I'm not such a fan about the way ...

Hello! Now, the topic of a mask, and masking your emotions, is one that you come across a lot in poetry. That doesn't mean that it is cliché in itself, ...

Hey there! Okay, so I have to say that the idea of this poem does have potential. When you think of invisibility, you can come up with any number of ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS - I hope you're enjoying it so far. :) Now, this poem. I'll break down my review into a few parts. I apologize if anything ...

Hey, Teddy! Firstly, if you have more chapters coming then I'm assuming this should be in Romantic Novels? If so, I'll move it for you. Just PM me. Character: I ...

Hi, Dante! Okay, so your subject choice here is a little vague. Although I am understanding the emotions you're conveying, there is no central theme, aside from emotion, that drives ...