AquaMarine

Hey there! Ok, so although people have gone over a lot, I'll give my thoughts on the whole thing. We were halfway down the street when I realized that I ...

Hey there! Thought I'd come and review you poem. Ok, so frist off I really like this piece. Really liked it. The punctuation however, I did not like. But everyone ...

Hey there! Ok, I'm not very familiar with the whole structure and rules of sonnets so I'm just going to say a couple of things that stood out to me. ...

Gold starred! This was total epic awesomeness (sorry - best way to describe it) Sometimes when I'm going to review/read a story on here I do different things at the ...

Hey! I'm going to leave the first verse, Galerius has pretty much said what I was thinking - much more eloquently though. Now I wait, alone and weary, Wishing only ...

Hey there! First off, this poem feels very genuine and heartfelt. I guess that’s 'cause you wrote it when you were feeling down – that gives it some extra oomph! ...

Hey there! Love isn't real, can't be here to stay. I'm not ready for it to steal my heart and soul away. I feel like you need some more syllables ...

This feels like the first stanza of a longer poem. A very good first stanza; I love the imagery, it flows well. But the problem is, I want to read ...

Hey there, this isn't really my type of song so I'm going to focus on the couple of mistakes I saw. Can you feel it, Question mark at the end. ...

Wow, I loved this. Although it's short, the words you've used are amazing, very well thought out and carefully placed. It all fits together perfectly. The imagery used is amazing ...

Hey Eddie! I decided to review... Also, here, where Demi says: Yeah, I think you definitely meant "pedals", because "peddle" means "to sell." I think she means petals, because a ...

Hi! Aqua here, let's take a look. Firstly, you need some punctuation in here. There is none, and most lines need a comma at the very least. I've tried to ...

Hey there! Sorry I'm a little late. By the way, I'm not great at grammar either, so chances are you will have done better than I could've... Ok, I have ...

Hi! Aqua here, I like the idea here, but (and I know I'm repeating others here) it is way too rushed and quick. Personally, I would split it into three ...

I love it, but I agree it seems unfinished. It literally needs about two lines at the end, I'm not up to this standard of poetry at all , but ...