AquaMarine

Hey there! Ok, so this poem seems to be suffering from the fact that it basically is prose with line breaks. This is such a great topic, such a great ...

Hmm, well obviously my first thought reading this were 'emo'. It feels a little self centred and a pretty typical suicide poem. You need to watch out for the typos. ...

Hey there! Well, this was a lovely poem. Very nice. It's one of those poems where there's actually some sort of unique style coming through which is cool. You seem ...

Hey there! Well, my first impression was that you were veering slightly on the way to angsty and self pitying here, but it's not a full blown emo poem so ...

Oh, I loved this poem! It was really nice. Like Matt, I'm not sure if the lines in italic are from the song or just part of the poem, but ...

Hey there! Now, while I do agree with Kammie that some of this poem is pretty angsty, I do like the way you've brought it back in the end by ...

Hey there! Ok, so I have a suggestion for you. Obviously here you've tried to integrate a rhyme scheme. Now, rhyme schemes can be pretty good BUT sometimes they don't ...

Hey there! Ok, so this was a pretty nice poem, I'll just go through it a bit. Rhyming: Rhyme Scheme: I preferred the second stanza to the first because in ...

Hey there! Here as requested. Wow, haha, this poem's a few months old? Oh well, you did want me to critique it. :D Themes: Number of themes: Ok, so at ...

Hey there! I'm here as requested. I skipped out chapter one because you already had a fair few reviews, and I couldn't add too much. Nitpicks Well, my first nitpick ...

Pink! I'm finally here. I'm so, so sorry that this took so long. )= I've been such a horrible procrastinator. But I was Victoria Mason, the girl everyone thought as ...

Hey there! I'm Amy, and I'll be reviewing this for you today. A few nitpicks that I'll just point out: It’s not that Ela hated summer; She just didn’t like ...

Hey Poddy! Here as requested. You get my first review as an instructor so fingers crossed, eh! He wants me to follow me , it’s important he says. 'Me to ...

Hey Lily! Here as requested. I think that I'm pretty familiar with the feeling! Some parts of your poem actually capture it really well, it's quite cute and quirky which ...

Hey Kammie! Beautiful poem, really nice! Your imagery is awesome, Kammie, it far surpasses anything I've attempted. One thing I noticed is that you're kind of inconsistent with your capitalization. ...