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Re: Hybrid
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Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: Finnegan's Death (Funny short story of sorts)
Finnegan...Finnegan... Where have I heard that darn name from....All well it's gone. I really liked these they were funny and... AWESOME!
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: ...Six...
Awsome! That's my one word to sum this story up! I absolutely love your work and wouldn't be surprised if I see it in shops some where...on the shelves...with all ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: The Notorious Chronicles Ch. 3
Woah, it's pretty long but hey its relly good so I'm not complaing. I like the way you explained things in a sort of liquid way
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Message in the Stars Part 1
Oooooo Awesome! Really cool, I think you could've added a bit more to it cause that is sort of short (No offence) But still really good. Grammar: None, couldn't see ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Testing, Testing
Great job! I think this is really well done and awesomely awesome. This is just a prologue right? Oh wait yeah it is, hehehe I see it at the top. ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: Two -- The Spider
(Y) I loved it! Can't wait for the next one!! :D Like I said before, I suck at grammar so I can't really tell if you made mistakes! Actually I ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Oblivion's Circus--chapter one
Hey this is so good, I truly love it! Can you please please please tell me when you get the next chapter out. I really want to keep reading this, ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Those Final Days
This is really really really good! I couldn't find hardly any grammatical errors or other errors that usually lag in peoples work (usually mine). But anyway I really love this ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Light by Night(0,1)
Okay here we go............... What I place in red is grammatical errors and what I place in blue is just other things. Review for you Forward: Forward The night is ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Ch 2: The Millian Drabbles
Heyo there! What I write in read is grammar mistakes in blue is just add you fancy. I'll place an overall comment in the bottom. Okay I'll fix up the ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Oh little marshmallow Peeps
Wow this is really good! As you already know I am really crappy at poetry so I can't edit anything but I can still say this is very good. And ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Check this out!! Chaper 1 preview-Do you like this??
I'M EDITTING YOUR WORK FOR YOU!!!! YAY ME!!! GO ME!!!! :smt064 What I place in red :smt013 are your mistakes and what I place in green :smt011 are just other ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One: The End
Heyo! Everything in red is going to be the corrections and in blue are just...stuff! Here goes nothing than...Don't get angry when I pick up on the smallest things! Okay ...
Feb 12, 2010 -
Re: Mei's Escape
Hi, I am going to be reviewer so here goes nothing: Here I stand, his eyes afire, his tongue ablaze, his hands alight. And only over a simple mistake. “Shut ...
Feb 7, 2010