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OOooOOoo very good! I think it flowed rather well, and hte different pace settings really added life to it! I think though the set out or really just length was ...

I don't really know how to review lyrics, but I'll give it my best go. I though this was a rather good song, talking about chi and all the bodily ...

Hey Skins, Apple here to finally do her review. Grammar: Out of the whole length of you text, this was the the only problem I came across. Other then that, ...

Hi, I'm Apple and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. Firstly I just want to add that this is rather short. Reading over it I think it must ...

dealing with the "pampered brat" I think you mean " pampered brats ", instead of just "pampered brat". I could find any other grammatical error, spelling mistake within the text. ...

You know, I really don't like it when people leave no grammar mistakes for me to find. Rather Rude if you ask me... And on top of that I saw ...

I don't think this is bad, and I do think it has potential...though you have to explain a lot more and add more, and I mean quite a lot more ...

Woah! Deep! :lol: I really liked it. I'm not that into poetry, cause I can never get how to read it or how to write it (The best thing I ...

Grammar: I couldn't find any problems with it. That is why there is no spoiler! You know you could've left a least a little mistake. How dare he I thought ...

Acceptance Review “Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!” As much as James wanted to ignore the chants of the teenagers surrounding him, he could not. He was certain, however, that the shouts ...

You fixed up all the mistakes! :) I can't find any grammar mistakes and I have already done the character and structure! :lol:

Last - Chapter I Review The breeze swept his unruly hair away from his face and back again, making the rough strands brush harshly against his skin as he watched ...

A Drop of Blood Review You stood there, bols as brass a look of contempt on your face you thought you were superior too good for us But you went ...

Apple's Reviews Raven High "...Everyone will have chance to enter Ravenwood Academy, it is if you passes our required tests then maybe you will be able to enter into our ...

Auschwitz: Work Makes You Free Review. Auschwitz: Work Makes You Free In 1940, the small army barracks just outside of Oswiecim, Poland was undergoing construction. Electric fences and sentry stations