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Thank you so much AlexofLight! I'm happy you liked my poem! To be honest, the 'ate with haste' part was a teeny part of me that I wanted to add ...

Thank you so much Poetrybug19! I'm glad you liked my poem! What I meant by the line "As she.......and pebbles threw in reflections of her blithe young frame.." was that ...

Thanks InfiniteRectangles! It's really nice to know someone can connect with the way I feel after reading my poem :)

Noelle, that review was absolutely amazing. This story is very personal. In fact, that girl is a person who is very close to my heart. I can see what you ...

Thank you Angrynoodles :) I really like your username by the way :D

Thank you so very much, HolographicLadybug! It's my first attempt at prose. I usually just stick with poetry. Your comment was extremely encouraging. Thank you, once again. I'm glad you ...

Okay now the poem just got sweeter. :) Thank you once again! :)

Thank you, OsirisCreed. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thank you very much Coehl :) And your interpretation of my poem is the closest to what I wanted to express. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you once again ...

Thank you Sarah :)

I think you could've used full stops in certain places and maybe using comma instead of semicolon would make it seem more elegant? Using capital letters in certain places would ...

Thank you, SummerSunshine :) I will.

Thank you, lonewolf22. I hope so too. :)