Anouk

This is really nice. Very expressive. I wonder who you had in mind when you wrote this. I like how you've described the sun. Like how it dazzles and the ...

Hiya! :) Your poem has nothing wrong with it as far as I can tell. I like that its main theme is Love. It's always an interesting topic to discuss. ...

I know the feeling of a writers block. I struggled to write a story or even a proper poem for over a year. For a while I thought I almost ...

Hi hi... When I read the part where you said "We can lick the sweet taste of it". I shamelessly thought of ice cream. I like the fact that despite ...

Hello, It feels rather sad the way you put it. I understand every word of it and every fear that you hold, because of getting your heart broken. But isn't ...

Hey, Alright, so I'll start off by saying that I'm not trying to be mean. I'm just pointing out a few things that seem to be lacking in your poem. ...

Okay when I saw this I thought it'd be a long thoughtful poem. But much to my surprise it turned out to be the exact opposite of it. I couldn't ...

I like where the story is going. Chapter 3 was really short. And some words were missing, proof-reading wold be helpful. Other than that. The story is really nice. Especially ...

Wow! Jack sounds interesting...Especially his eyes. I love how you've expressed them. Auxi.....Now there's a character I like. A woman in power has always been my favorite. But the fact ...