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Re: Nothing but a country song
I just changed it up a bit. I included the bird earlier in the poem and I was sure to add something about an old truck. My main point with ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Nothing but a country song
That makes a lot of sense. I really need to revisit this and revise. Thank you!
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Nothing but a country song
Thank you for your kind words and advice, I will keep that in mind when I revisit this piece.
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: Nothing but a country song
Thank you for your kind words Jabber. I had a hard time writing this because it was one of my first pieces that has MY emotions and not ones that ...
Oct 7, 2019 -
Re: With a Whisper
Thanks!
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Two
Alright, I just wanted to make sure, great job!
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter One
no problem, I plan on doing more in the future!
Apr 11, 2019 - Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Two Apr 10, 2019
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Re: With a Whisper
Thank you so much for the nice comments! I will be sure to read over the poem again and look for similar typos. Thank you so much, have a wonderful ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: As time flies by
I hate to correct you, butttttt, you used the wrong form of your/you're
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The leaving of a Lover
Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words. it has been hard for me to get back onto this website, so hearing this really helped. Have a wonderful day.
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The leaving of a Lover
oh goodness, for some reason I totally missed that. thank you so much 4rev
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The leaving of a Lover
Thank you Flaming! I left it without punctuation because of the nature of this kind of work. This type was traditionally written about nature, and it was meant to stay ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The leaving of a Lover
Thank you for the review Fabiha
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The one who took my pain away - a sonnet
Thank you for your advice. I will have to rework this. I thought it would be fun to switch things up a bit!
Apr 9, 2019