Annapurna

Helloo!!! :D Just wanted to quickly say that I think this is beautiful! I want to just read it again and again because I know this has a deeper meaning ...

That's okay, happy to help! :) I am fine for reviews just now but thanks anyway! Welcome to yws by the way! Pretty awesome poem for such a new member! ...

Thanks for the feedback, I'll do my best to improve it! :)

Thanks Kaylyn! I appreciate the feed back! :)

Thanks! :D The next chapter will be up shortly, I love your avatar by the way! :)

thanks! :) i have no idea why "pursonatly" is even in there? I will edit that out. I explain more about the Dronkas etc in later chapters as well. Thanks ...

Hi there! :) Firstly I would like to begin by saying I loved reading this poem! The flow of the whole piece is perfect, which is quite hard to master ...

Hi there! I like this poem its sweet and sounds like something out of a fairy tale! its cute! :) I think you need to work on the structure, right ...

Hi Noelle, thanks for the review!The next chapter will be up soon but I completely understand how hard school work can be so don't worry! :)

Okay thanks! :) this helps a lot! I'll also keep it in mind for future poems! Strange to here that my poem was projected to your class, wasn't expecting that! ...

Thanks! :) appreciate it!

Hi Noelle! Thanks for the advice, this means a lot! I'll defiantly work on the points you brought up and i'll let you know when I've submitted chapter two :) ...

Thanks Jon, I appreciate it! :D Hope u had a great Easter too!