Anma

Hello TylynRae! Wow...This is really a great poem, you did really good on it. I'm going to point out what you maybe should fix on it, then what's really great ...

Hello Jasper! I hope you don't mind me calling you that. This is a really good poem. I really enjoyed reading it and I'm looking forward to reading more from ...

Hello Morgan!! I really love this song you made!! Its really touchy and it has a lot of feeling. I can tell you worked hard on this and i really ...

Hello Again DreamWorx The last chapter " oh no, better catch up". (Latter) This is really good and i love how you ended it. I found a few mistakes though> ...

Hello again!! :) Another great chapter! I really enjoy reading your stuff honestly. When i have time ill read from the beginning... but for now.... Here are some suggestions i ...

Hello Cyr! Anma here for review!! This is really great, if you ask me it actually reminds me of one of my books i read. I cant remember what it ...

Hello Sub! Hope you don't mind the name. Anyway... this was a great read!! I love how creative this story is, its really good. I do have some suggestions for ...

Hello Blairwood! Anma here to review!! Here is some suggestion i have for you 1."It reminded her of a summer beach where the wind would whip up the sand until ...

Hello Millefira I'm not sure if i spelled that correctly. Going on... Anma here to review! This is really lovely, i really enjoyed reading it. Though i did catch some ...

Hi Tuckster!! Anma here for a review! before i get started i do want to say this is the first/ only chapter i have read from you. Sooooo...Ya Anyway.. This ...

Hello!! Anma here to review! Before i get started i just want to say i have not read the first chapters soooo..... ya. Anyway this is pretty good chapter. I ...

Hello Blue!! Can I call you that?? Anyway...... This is really interesting. I love the structure of the poem its really creative. I love the similes you put in about ...

Hello shieldmaiden! This is really a great way to start a story. The action and events really made it a great read. It flows very neatly and I just have ...

Very creative Liberty! Maybe I should start writing stuff like this. It will get ride of writers block and help me practice writing. Lol :) Anyways.... on with the review! ...

Hello Joseph! This is a very interesting poem. Its very unusual from most poem, which made it a very fun read. The way you described the hippo was fantastic, you ...