Angrynoodles

I just finished but I not sure how to go about a review.... Is this fiction or non-fiction? If it is real, that was very interesting. For someone around your ...

Heyyy, I am going to review this soo here I go... I am not one for love stories but I might be able to get into this. The writing style ...

I used to live in Japan... but I barely remember any Japanese so I can't really read the title. It says something about the ocean and sky being Shallow. Anyway ...

Great work. It looks like you have the start of an amazing story. But this is a review so I have to correct the mistakes I saw. Alright so, starting ...

Alright, so I came to read this because I am writing a book where people have multiple lives and heal when they are killed. Other than that the stories seem ...

Hello, I am here for a review! So in the beginning you start out really strong. The only thing that I would change would be how you start the first ...

Alright, I am here for a review! You are a new member so this must be one of your first post, huh? I will start with grammatical errors. Being blunt, ...

Alright I am here for a review! So starting with grammatical errors. First, You have to capitalize "Mars" and "Earth" every time you use them. Second, you do not need ...

That was... amazing. I enjoyed this very much. Your style of writing really complemented the story. I especially like the way to describe things, particularly the students and the trees. ...

Alright, whenever I see a 'Chapter 1' I like to read it and see if I want to keep up with the story. I could get behind this. Your style ...

Usually if I see a first chapter I like to read it and see if I would like to keep up with the series. This was very good. I do ...

Oh, I really liked this. The story was so simplistic but It kept me reading. The way you describe the characters and their clothes really helped me see them as ...

That was really good. I liked the way you used similes and metaphors, "like having a pouch of golds." The way you present it was very simple but it made ...

Alright I am here for a review! It was a little hard to get through it the first time around. The beginning just kind of speeds past even through it ...

Talk about plot twist. I was wondering where they were and Afterlife was not what I was expecting. I really enjoyed the story and direction you took it in. As ...