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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Mr. Angel...[Chapter 1-part one] ALIA

    I am tired, I am frustrated and I am lonely. My legs are hurting and I do not have a penny in my pocket. Hey! Wait; don't go there so ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Red Door (Seasame Sleep)

    I really really liked this. The opening was great and it threw us into a great scene wherein the main character remembers a therapy session. I think it's a wonderful ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: A Monologue

    Hey Sopster, I'm here because well I am. I like this mainly because I can relate to the speaker's voice which is incredibly strong and the vivid imagery in the ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Prologue

    Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl who lived in a town beside the forest. Formerly the town had been a peaceful one and thousands of people had ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: New Beginning...

    The soft beautiful sunlight falling on the French windows in front of the house reflected Sasha’s pale face, I don't know why but your imagery bothers me. Sometimes I feel ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Life's Empty Path

    Hello, I'm Anger and I'll be your reviewer for the day. For me this poem is too short to really make an impact. I get the general message of the ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: sorry i don't want it up anymore

    What brought me to this was the name, it really drew me in. I think you've explained what you meant by 'The Truth Sits' but I can't help but to ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roads

    I like the idea that all roads lead somewhere, but after a while the idea devolves because it slowly becomes rambles. I believe that if you developed the character a ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The sight of you.

    The sight of you, made my knees go weak, and I wondered if you still cared. The sight of you, made miss all the things we shared. The sight of ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Statistics

    Perse, it's been a while since I've reviewed anything by you, so here goes nothing. This is very impressing, in fact it's one of my favourite poems by you. It's ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: I Believe... Do You?

    I liked this, it was an interesting read. Quite impressive that you could your thoughts into sentences and then into a piece like this but on the other side you ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Through the Glass

    This was very entertaining a bit on the over-dramatic side. I think you could have interpreted your MC's emotions better in a way by developing on how he feels, and ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Despair

    I quite liked this but it wasn't as dark as expected. Very self-deprecating though. It's too short for me to really say anything tangible about it. It was definitely well ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trip Me Again, Please

    Personally I really liked reading this except the first paragraph threw me off. I don't think it's the best note to start with. It was a very sweet love poem ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Alex

    Like Dudette I like the shortness of this piece but I think there are bits where it would have been wise to add a bit more description for example longish ...

    Mar 27, 2011


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