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Re: Mr. Angel...[Chapter 1-part one] ALIA
I am tired, I am frustrated and I am lonely. My legs are hurting and I do not have a penny in my pocket. Hey! Wait; don't go there so ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Red Door (Seasame Sleep)
I really really liked this. The opening was great and it threw us into a great scene wherein the main character remembers a therapy session. I think it's a wonderful ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: A Monologue
Hey Sopster, I'm here because well I am. I like this mainly because I can relate to the speaker's voice which is incredibly strong and the vivid imagery in the ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Prologue
Once upon a time there was a beautiful girl who lived in a town beside the forest. Formerly the town had been a peaceful one and thousands of people had ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: New Beginning...
The soft beautiful sunlight falling on the French windows in front of the house reflected Sasha’s pale face, I don't know why but your imagery bothers me. Sometimes I feel ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Life's Empty Path
Hello, I'm Anger and I'll be your reviewer for the day. For me this poem is too short to really make an impact. I get the general message of the ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: sorry i don't want it up anymore
What brought me to this was the name, it really drew me in. I think you've explained what you meant by 'The Truth Sits' but I can't help but to ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Roads
I like the idea that all roads lead somewhere, but after a while the idea devolves because it slowly becomes rambles. I believe that if you developed the character a ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The sight of you.
The sight of you, made my knees go weak, and I wondered if you still cared. The sight of you, made miss all the things we shared. The sight of ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Statistics
Perse, it's been a while since I've reviewed anything by you, so here goes nothing. This is very impressing, in fact it's one of my favourite poems by you. It's ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: I Believe... Do You?
I liked this, it was an interesting read. Quite impressive that you could your thoughts into sentences and then into a piece like this but on the other side you ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Through the Glass
This was very entertaining a bit on the over-dramatic side. I think you could have interpreted your MC's emotions better in a way by developing on how he feels, and ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Despair
I quite liked this but it wasn't as dark as expected. Very self-deprecating though. It's too short for me to really say anything tangible about it. It was definitely well ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Trip Me Again, Please
Personally I really liked reading this except the first paragraph threw me off. I don't think it's the best note to start with. It was a very sweet love poem ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Alex
Like Dudette I like the shortness of this piece but I think there are bits where it would have been wise to add a bit more description for example longish ...
Mar 27, 2011
