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  • Short Story » General, General Re: She the Skeleton

    Yo :D I like this, but then again it confuses me. I adore the way it's broken up into paragraph and it has the feel of dream sequences, but at ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Reward

    Hullo, Anger here :) I'm tired of having to deal with. with what? Structure: It didn't work for this poem because halfway through there is a change in tone where ...

    Jan 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Wouldn't Mom be Proud

    Hello, I'm Anger and I guess I'll be your reviewer for today. I had to check this again to make sure it really was in short stories because it read ...

    Jan 1, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pull the Trigger

    Hai Deanie I haven't ever reviewed something of yours despite my attempts so here goes nothing xD My review will be split into two sections: (1) Repetition and (2) Digging ...

    Dec 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Eddie♥

    Aloha :) I haven't reviewed in a while, so do please bear with me. :D I'll be reviewing it in chunks and then later I'll expand on my points. I ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: thursday rehearsal.

    I feel like all of this but yeah about the bottle it was luck, god dammit , luck that got me there right on time for me to run in ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Mind

    “Anyways onto business,” he declared professionally as he wiped a smear away from his name tag and pulled out a chair to an empty table for Tory to sit at ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Without conditions

    I'm not the best for reviewing romance novels but I'll give this my best shot. Something that really bothered me was the use of > instead of "" and it ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kaeru: Part #4

    Again yet another chapter that I like. But I keep waiting for your MC's world to come crashing down because I'm evil like that. You've created some conflict in the ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kaeru: Part #2

    Hullo Ten, I love this. You'll know that from my previous review but this one's a bit confusing. You start out in third person I believe and somehow you end ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kaeru: Part #1

    Wow, Ten-Ten I'm so impressed. I've read your stuff but I don't think any of them have been as near-perfect as this one. I love your descriptions, your character and ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)

    I quite like this. It's quite obvious what is going to happen from beginning to end but you make it easy to digest, you introduce us to both your characters ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's What I Thought

    Okies, this will one of my first reviews in a long, long time so bear with me. You said you loved me, like the rain in july. You said it ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hypocrite

    I really liked reading this because as I continued to read through it I felt like I was looking into a distorted reflection of myself and I think it's great ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Dear Person

    Hey CHANG, Normally I don't like poetry like this at all because I don't believe in God but I kind of liked this but at bits of this I felt ...

    May 5, 2011


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