Angels-Symphony

Hey Kris ^^ Shina here ;P I'll be your reviewer for today. I'm going to go against what lin said about being more sympathetic towards those type of people, because ...

Hey Rascallover ^^ Shina here ;P I got your request so here I am! Okay, so this is chapter six of your romantic fiction, yes? I'm not really sure how ...

Warrior Princess! I must say, you have a way with words ^^ I'd love to see the world through your eyes. You make everything, even things so tragic, seem so ...

Hey KJ ^^ Shina here ;P And I will be your reviewer today. Okay, let's start with the beginning: The first three lines are really inviting. They make the reader ...

Hi Warrior Princess ^^ Shina here ;P I'll be your reviewer today. I'm not going to go deep into all the commas and structure and all that, but when I ...

Linnn!! *tear rolls down cheek* I thought it was beautiful :D I was listening to a sad song while reading this too. You've just inspired me and kicked me out ...

Hey Spike ^^ Shina here ;) Since everyone else seemed to cover all the Iambic Pentameter and weak beginnings and all that jazz, I'll cover the overall poem. I really ...

Hey Ash ^^ Shina here ;) (finally)... You were right about the lack of reviews, hopefully I can make up for it @_@ First Impressions: I like the idea here ...

Hey Spike ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer for today. I fixed some things in the actualy poem, but I would like to point out that the 3rd ...

Well, here I go again. This is my second attempt at poetry. Enjoy! :D --- You’ll have to forgive me, for borrowing your heart. But give me a second, to ...

Hey Spike ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer for today. Okay, well the overall point of this poem is a cliche, but something about it is fresh. I ...

Hey Spike ^^ Shina here once again, and I'm actually not disappointed this time. This was better than my original expectations. This poem is blunt. It's brief and quick just ...

Hey Spike! Shina here again ;) I'm reviewing another one of poems since I've already started to attack your portfolio. You said you write like me, so I want to ...

Oh god, I wannna go back to Earth. For I wanna wipe away the tears, From the eyes of little children. Oh god I wanna go back to Earth. For ...

Hi Anti-Pop ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer today since you are one of my favorite victims (mostly because your pieces are much funner to read then everyone ...