Angels-Symphony

Hey Fates ^^ I'm Shina, and I'll be your reviewer this evening ;) Welcome to YWS! My name is Calvin Gray I'm sure your teacher has told you that "My ...

Hey foxfire ^^ Shina here for a review ;) *this story is an extract of my novel but my creative teacher told me to start with short stories before i ...

Hey Rice Crispy ;) Shina here for a review. The swill of meal went down Amarian’s throat, yet it brought him no solace from what plagued his mind. He still ...

Hey Nixie ^^ Shina here, and I'll be doing a review for you this evening ;) I cannot write you anymore, My golden pen has fallen; Decent imagery here ^^ ...

Hey KJ ^^ Here to do my second review on the experiment ;) I'm multi-tasking, so I hope this still goes well =_= “I can’t do anything today,” I said ...

Hey Dradian ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon. Somnia. The world is drenched in a soft silky shadow, the pure, untainted darkness of the Daybreak Solstice. ...

Hey Nixie ^^ Shina here as requested! Luckily, I've seen what it's like in the Philippines and I know about how in some parts of the Philippines people throw rocks ...

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My shoeless feet escort me through the wood I don't really like the word "shoeless" here. It ruins it for me. Maybe some rewording. Where dampened soil tells of winter ...

Hey Tiger ^^ Shina here, and this evening you shall get my first review as an instructor :P Through death and destruction the feud continues. This is a decent hook, ...

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Hey TypeWriter ^^ I'm Shina and shall be your reviewer this afternoon. I woke to the the dead silence of the on-going night. Kind or ironic,don't you think? It sounds ...

Hey Cammie ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon. I stare up at the blue-haired boy standing on the porch. Yes! Finally someone who can include multi-colored ...

Hi Khimera ^^ Welcome to YWS. I'm Shina, your reviewer for this evening. The mirror basilica Capitalize all the first letters of your chapter name. Screech! Scream! Crash! Puff! Ugh! ...

Hey Mario ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening ;) I throw the freezing cold water on my face, my palms are begging to numb as they are pressed against ...