AngelKnight900

I think that this poem was well written and you had me feeling your emotion in here. I like your moral that says " That you can't love a boy ...

I like this poem but I think you can extend it a little more. Like there is so much to talk about so I think you could make it longer ...

Hahaha well thnx for the reviews but I actually changed this chapter completely.

Bravo! Bravo! This is really good and a great way to start a story. Usually I skip prologues, but yours are different. Good job and keep writing.

This is very good and I really admire your writing. Keep writing :D

Wow.....I'm unbelievably impressed. I want to know what happens next so please keep writing.

I really enjoyed this and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good job and keep writing. That's all I got to say and usually I say a lot ...

Thanks....I made minor changes to the chapter.

This was very well written and it caught my attention instantly. I admire your use of context and description since I'm a fan of such things. So keep writing.

Hahaha basically everything will be explained later on

This is a really good first chapter. It caught my attention and I held it. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your chapters and possibly other works. Keep ...

Awww why does it have to be so short? :( That's the only thing I can say and I was really starting to enjoy this. Don't keep your chapters so ...

I will say one word. BRAVO

hanks for reading this I really appreciate the response. Almost always I picture everything as if it were a movie. It works that way with almost everything I write, mostly ...

Awesome beginning. I love it. Can't wait to read the second chapter. Keep writing