Angel17

I agree with dream deep. The rhyming was not right for the message you are trying to convey. Also i think make your poem longer. But i did like some ...

I think due to the short line lengths, the poem did not feel too long whilst reading it, in my opinion. I thought this was a lovely poem.

I fear for your safety And fret for your sanity This part was really good, and was really effective in the poem. I liked this.

I was short, but had a deeper meaning. Good poem

A beautifully written poem, with stunning, vivid imagery. I loved this.

This was a good poem. It had really good detail described well. I think the last stanza was written very well especially the last few lines

This was a nicely written poem. Easy to read, but had a deeper meaning

This was really funny, and random!

I agree with Doubt, i enjoyed the detailed imagery, and i liked the sudden stop at the end. great work

The end felt a bit rushed to me. The beginning was deep and well thought out, and i thought it should of been a lot longer near the end, because ...

The rhythm and rhyme was done really well. But apart from the first line, i didn't really see that much imagery in this. I loved the repitition of 'and this ...

in just three lines, some wonderful imagery was created well. good job!

2-4 was an enjoyable read, nice meanings

I really enjoyed the steady rhythm and the unforced rhyming. Really good poem

typical maybe?