AneiDoru

This poem to me describes aging, and how your body starts betraying you when you get older. The cracking of our backs, pulling tightness out of our bodies, things we ...

I'm wondering why the staff, besides the doctor, had told her about her family. They usually don't do that. I'm confused as to why she doesn't want to see her ...

Thank you for clarifying in the beginning, but it should be up to the reader to interpret what is said instead of putting in bold what the words meant, it ...

This poem perfectly describes a toxic relationship, being hurt, them apologizing, and then the cycle repeats itself. It also describes perfectly how people can hide their problems from others. This ...

Why does the text center and then go left intermittently? It really confused me there. also 'You had a Swallows and Amazons' should be 'you had Swallows and Amazons'. Also, ...

This poem is great at describing friendship, and when friends fight because of a new relationship that comes in between them. I feel that maybe the girlfriend didn't want you ...

You wrote 'two could play a game' instead of 'two could play at that game', which confused me a bit. Also 'she chanted it like a manthra' is misspelled, it's ...

Love is always a learning experience, I've had some nasty breakups before, and I know what it's like to hold onto a relationship for far too long and hoping it ...

It seems that I'm getting the idea that she said she has layers of who she is when you can just easily break past her walls and see who she ...

I like that you put all sorts of important and timeless places into this poem, it shows that you are trying to convey how important those words are to you, ...

It feels like a diary page or some scribbling in a a notebook. I think everyone knows the feeling of losing all our bookmarks and having to start all over ...

The grammatical errors are, instead of an accident, purposeful and add meaning to the poem, because of how young the frog is. It has a sort of feel like a ...

I love how it feels like a diary entry from someone who is having cognitive issues, it makes me think he might be having deep leg thrombosis or something along ...

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