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Re: The Flyers and Runners
Hello! Let me first congratulate you on this amazing poem! I liked every single line! The first thing I noticed and I really liked about your poem were the simple ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: A chance not taken
Hello! I really liked your poem. I think the choice of words is great and the usage of rhymes is amazing. I think rhyme patterns are really important for a ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Icebreakers
Hello! I liked your writing a lot and I think you did a great job! Great idea, great choice of words and amazing usage of rhetorical questions! Tension, suspension all ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Mistakes Were Meant To Be Made
Hello! I found it interesting, but a bit confusing at times. Maybe it's a fragment of something else, I don't know, I just found this. As I read the first ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Close Your Eyes
I simply loved every single word of this poem. I enjoyed reading it! I think that the part I liked the most is the imagery used here and also the ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: The Voices
Oh wow! This is really good and inspiring. You kept me in suspension till the very end that I really liked. I think the last part is the most breathtaking ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: Heart of Ash
I really loved your work. I think your usage of metaphors and other stylistic features is great. It made me think about how the girl might have felt and that ...
Sep 18, 2015
