AndrewRayne

Good afternoon, So, you're story here portrays a kind of eulogy that most people experience every day of their lives. That being said, in doing so, when we read these ...

Good afternoon Morrigan. It was a pleasure to read such a piece such as this. It is not everyday you see poets express their emotion on the subject of current ...

Now this, is more like it. A fine number if I do say so myself. Let us begin. The beginning was a perfect way to set the scene of modern ...

It is wonderful, and a relief that a mind could capture so elegantly an idea that is so dully fabricated. Marvelous to say the least. I wish to critique, but ...

Made the regard that the sentiment is immediately capturing. Though the run on sentence should be structured accordingly. "Never has anyone ever been tough enough to live a lifetime alone ...

Good afternoon Dr. Numbers of blasting computer trolls. I would like to congratulate on you the imagery this piece accomplishes. That being said, let us get into it. The first ...

Good evening my friend. I will start off by saying that the first critique shall be to give attention to your spelling, as I spent far to much time trying ...

Hehe, I will try not to assume this was completely serious, but in all accounts give critique as if it was. Before I do so however, might I say that ...

Ah Inkwell you are surely becoming one of my more intriguing poets on this site. Now this, is surely a work written with brilliance. I would not be so bold ...

Good morning to you Inkwell. A pleasure of course, and lets go ahead and get right into it shall we? I have decided to take this a verse at a ...

A fine alternate viewpoint, and one that surely would have pressed eve the original as to which one could have been more inviting to remember. But of course, originals have ...

Ms. Nanya, I do believe I should return the favor for such a wonderful review on my own work, and I adore hearing the theories of other minds. :) Now, ...

Good afternoon Mr. Morrigan. I do think that as a poem that isn't serious at all, especially for a villanelle such as this, you have done exceptionally well. The very ...