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Re: Dancing with the devil
I love this! Thank you so much
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Re: Smoke
I wrote about a friend of mine, in some sense the poem is very literal, some additions are metaphorical. But the poem is mostly about how I can see him ...
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Re: Smoke
Hello, thank you for the comment. I jus love reading them. I was actually not writing about an abusive relationship, but that is the beauty of poetry, everyone can interpret ...
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Re: Smoke
Hahahahah. Yes, of course!
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Re: Don't Fear the Reaper
Heyy. I really like this poem and how it handles themes of death, as not being bad, but more neutral. The tone also stuck out to me, as it seems ...
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Re: Don't Fear the Reaper
Heyy. I really like this poem and how it handles themes of death, as not being bad, but more neutral. The tone also stuck out to me, as it seems ...
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Re: Dancing with the devil
Heyy, thank you for the review. I love reading these. :)
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Re: Dancing with the devil
Hello! Thank you for the review. The poem is meant to be entirely up to interpretation but personal at the same time. :)
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Re: Freckles
Hello! Thank you for the review. I am also a hopeless romantic for life haha.
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Re: Freckles
Hey, thank you so much for the review. And thanks for the technical critique, I will definitely edit the poem a little.
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Re: Freckles
Thank you so much for the review. I really enjoyed reading it. The line about stars was indeed intentional.
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Re: wildflower drowning in the dark
This is heartbreaking, but also beautiful. Your imagery is out of this world. "maybe i'm the flower he gives to the girl as beautiful as the moon maybe i'm the ...
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Re: wildflower drowning in the dark
This is heartbreaking, but also beautiful. Your imagery is out of this world. "maybe i'm the flower he gives to the girl as beautiful as the moon maybe i'm the ...
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