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Re: Werewolfing. 1
Thank you for reviewing :) As a general rule, they have wolf-senses in wolf form and human senses in human form.
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 8
Thank you for reviewing :) Yeah... my only excuse is that I wrote this in a rush, so it's pretty sloppy. I shall tidy it up, though, before I post ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 7
No, no it was a pronoun mix-up xD As for the werewolves' senses and impulses - they're human in human form and wolf in wolf form, although their actual consciousness ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 6
Thank you for your review :) I really need to work on their interactions and relationship, yeah. I think I'll go over it before I post the ninth chapter, just ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 5
Yeaahhhh I edited it. I'm in the process of making the posted story way better while doing the same for the unposted, so ya got me there. It did end ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 5
Thank you for reviewing :) Elliot -- the stranger -- does get more character development later on, though I should probably start with it earlier. Riley is Seb's foster mother, ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 6
Thank you :) I'll work on my dialogue tags - it's a real weak point of mine. The smell of the trap works on werewolves in both human and wolf ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 8
Thank you for reviewing :) And I'll tag you when I post the ninth chapter. Gah I have so much to redo when I edit this. I'll try to make ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 8
Sorry for the late reply. Kinda forgot this was here. Thank you for the review and pointing out the errors! I'll redo them when I start to edit the story ...
Sep 7, 2016 -
Re: Chasing Eden
Thank you for the review :) It was only a one-off, so - probably - won't write any more of it, especially now I have two full-on stories to work ...
Sep 5, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 4
Thank you for the review and advice :) It was, as usual, really helpful and in-depth. I'll heed the suggestions when I rewrite. -AnarchyWolf
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Sealskins
Thank you :) I'll correct the errors and add in the improvements when I get time to rewrite this. -AnarchyWolf
Sep 3, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 1
Thanks for such an in-depth review :) Riley and Tiffany are married, but call each other 'partner' for fun, to confuse people. I'll make it clearer when I go over ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 2
Thank you for reviewing :) Again, you raised a load of things I didn't think about. So much to redo when I edit. I really need to look over character ...
Sep 2, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 3
Thanks so much for reviewing :) Sorry for the lat reply - I've been travelling. You raise a lot of issues that I haven't really thought of, especially foreshadowing Tanvi's ...
Sep 2, 2016
