Anabelle

Hello, Creativein5seconds! Anabelle here for a review! Welcome to YWS! This was very cute for your first piece of writing on here. I don't mean that in a condescending way; ...

Hello, AidaApple! Anabelle here for a review. This was a very short story, which I'm guessing you did on purpose. I actually liked that it was so short, because you ...

Hey there, rhiasofia! HAHAHAHA! This is seriously hilarious! The title and the description got my attention right away. Very well done! Although there is some very funny humor in this, ...

Hello, JParks! Okay, let's get down to business. I really hope you don't get offended by my review and I am in no way trying to come off as rude, ...

Hi, supernb! Anabelle here for a review. So, I cant argue with the fact that the topic you chose to write about is undoubtedly true and speaks to every single ...

Hi there! :) Okay, there a few things I am confused on, but I get the gist of the story which is good. You didn't completely lose me! So far, ...

Hey, here for a review! First, I loved your topic . While some people say they have no regrets in life, we have all been down a road where we've ...

Hi there, FantasyWriterGirl15! I'm here for a review. Wow, you have some talent. This was an incredibly interesting start to your story and, I have to say, you've got me ...

Hi, queerelves! I'm here for a review. I noticed in the note you left that you didn't want a lot of focus on the quality of writing, just the characters ...

Hello, Blacksmith42. Here for a review... well, if you could call it that. I almost don't even want to review this, because it seems so raw. How can I tell ...

Hey, Roundsquare! Here is my review. Okay, I really liked this for a first chapter. It's not too long and gets straight to the point with VERY good description in ...

Hi there! Let me just say that this poem was like nothing I've ever read on body image. It is such a common topic in society today, and many people ...

Hi, donizback! For someone that claims they're not a good poet, this is great! I love how you talk about the overuse of the word "love" (first stanza). It's a ...

Hi, Jared! Whoa... this was excellent. I loved how it jumps right into something interesting - we don't need to wait for anything! Also, this is a very original and ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this poem and I love the detail that was put into this. My favorite thing is the parallelism you used by connecting the shirttails from ...