Amnien

I really like this story. It has heart and character and it struck a emotional connection with me. I defiantly know how important and sacred a mother can be. I ...

I really like this piece of writing. It's simple and intriguing and I thought that the direction that you took the writing prompt was absolutely genius. I think you captured ...

Wow. That's all I can say! I am really speechless. The poem was able to connect with me and as a reader that is gravely important. But, the amazing thing ...

I really like this! Like a lot! You seemed to capture the emotion and spacious thinking of most people. I normally don't try and review poems. Only because I don't ...

Hmm, I'm still not very good at this whole review thing.. Oh well, here goes nothing! Anyways, I really like your story. The pacing was great and understandable. The length ...

Wow... I really, and I mean really, love this! A almost perfect short story! So tender and sweet and it also makes you kind of stop to think about your ...

This was very confusing. Which it that was what you were aiming for, then good job! I know this was a short story but it was VERY rushed. Which made ...

Unlike the other two reviewers I cannot picture any of the characters saying these things. I think the overall story is good and believable, but, I don't think the dialogue ...

I'm viewing your story on my phone right now so i'm going to make this review quick. So if it comes across rude, i'm sorry, i'm not trying to be. ...

I know this review is late and probably pointless but it's because I just found this story. I really loved it! I liked the quick short sentence writing style. To ...

I really like it! For some reason I kept picturing Freddy Kruger through out the whole song! :/ Anyways I could practically already hear this song. A faint organ in ...

I agree with everything jokeless said, the biggest one being with the names. I understand it's set a long time ago but boring names bring down the relationship between the ...

Hi! First I like the idea. It's original and has a lot of potential. I had a couple minor problems though: It should be His body they’ll find. His shouldn't ...

I like it, it's dark, compelling and original! At first I pictured the predator as a wolf, but if it has claws it has to be a cougar or a ...

Hello Beautiful! Haha anyways, I liked it. But some advice, I learned yesterday, is to wait about a week before posting another chapter. That way everyone has a chance to ...