Amindor

Your review certainly has helped; I wasn't even aware that some words were bold. I do agree that my first lines could be stronger. Thank you!

Hello! Thank you for the review, but I just want to say that I also have an introduction of the story if you want to see it! Thanks!

Thank you! I'm glad this poem reached out to you

Oh. That's what you meant. The old doctor who? I've heard of it and lately, I have been trying to watch the old one. And yes, I did start on ...

No problem! And no; I haven't watched classic who. What is it?

Thank you for the advice! I'll certainly check that out.

Hi 1998, Amindor here. This is an amazing poem, and I can't stop reading it. The way you talked about death is something I've never seen. I love how you ...

Honestly I just published this for the heck of it, so I know what you mean. And that does sound interesting. Well, I love photography and interacting with people. I ...

Hi MissLyricz! Thank you so much for reading my story; I've been wanting to get more feedback so I can improve it. Also, the thing about his father the next ...

Hi FallWolf, Amindor here. Although I seem to always see things like this, that talk from a cat's perspective, I think overall this would be my favorite. There are absolutely ...

That's actually a good idea! Thanks for the review!!

Thank you so much for the review!!

Thanks so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to fix any mistakes I made. I just wrote this quickly and I should've thought about it more. I can understand ...

Thank you for the review, and I do apologize for the confusion about it. The fear or protection part- What I meant by that is, you know how some people ...

Hi Kanome, Amindor here. This poem, in great terms, is deep. It has a strong feel for the reader and has a very big amount of symbolism. It's dark, but ...