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Re: The Secret of the Costume Room
Hiya! Amelia here for a review. Firstly, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this short! The idea itself is very original and quirky, and when I saw ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Lost Kids
I really enjoyed reading this! It is incredibly well written, and has an indescribable aura about it. The characters are so well thought out, and the way you have described ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: The Immigrants
Hey! Amelia here for a short review. This story was a very exciting read. I enjoyed it very much. I could sense a very tense mood right from the start, ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Once Again
I really enjoyed this. The ending is so sad, and the way you ended by making the narrator question whether she should just go too is heartbreaking. The two main ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Red Hand Came Out // Pt. 1
This was a very interesting story. I felt you introduced the characters well, and I could perfectly follow what was happening. I particularly liked how you switched perspectives from one ...
Dec 28, 2016 -
Re: Black
Oh my gosh, this was amazing. It was so beautiful and powerful, my jaw literally dropped whilst I was reading it. "Black is the color of the thick hair of ...
Dec 27, 2016 -
Re: I Remember
Firstly, I'm bad at reviewing so please forgive me. I really enjoyed this. It was very dark and meaningful, and I think it is really interesting that you chose to ...
Dec 22, 2016 -
Re: Blue Boys
Hiya, just a very short review for you here! I enjoyed this very much. I have to say that my favourite part was the paragraph in which you described the ...
Dec 13, 2016 -
Re: Impassioned Lesson By A Sari
Hiya, Amelia here for a short review. I found this piece incredibly interesting to read, and enjoyed every word of it. I loved the way you described what each part ...
Oct 23, 2016 -
Re: Burning Rocks
Hiya, Amelia here with a review! I found this story beautifully sad and very interesting. All of your descriptions were amazing, and I really enjoyed the opening few paragraphs, where ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Blaze
I have to admit, after seeing the title, this story was not what I expected (in a good way)! I was pleasantly surprised by this, it was very sweet and ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: Life as a Painting
Hey, I'll be reviewing your poem today :) Firstly, I absolutely love this concept, and I really enjoyed the way you used it in this poem. There was a clear ...
Oct 21, 2016 -
Re: She Is
I enjoyed this story very much! The opening grabbed my attention immediately, and I found myself wanting to know what happened to the child. I found Maia's back story very ...
Oct 21, 2016
