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AmeliaGryffin

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The Secret of the Costume Room

    Hiya! Amelia here for a review. Firstly, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this short! The idea itself is very original and quirky, and when I saw ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Lost Kids

    I really enjoyed reading this! It is incredibly well written, and has an indescribable aura about it. The characters are so well thought out, and the way you have described ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Culture Re: The Immigrants

    Hey! Amelia here for a short review. This story was a very exciting read. I enjoyed it very much. I could sense a very tense mood right from the start, ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Once Again

    I really enjoyed this. The ending is so sad, and the way you ended by making the narrator question whether she should just go too is heartbreaking. The two main ...

    Dec 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Red Hand Came Out // Pt. 1

    This was a very interesting story. I felt you introduced the characters well, and I could perfectly follow what was happening. I particularly liked how you switched perspectives from one ...

    Dec 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Black

    Oh my gosh, this was amazing. It was so beautiful and powerful, my jaw literally dropped whilst I was reading it. "Black is the color of the thick hair of ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: I Remember

    Firstly, I'm bad at reviewing so please forgive me. I really enjoyed this. It was very dark and meaningful, and I think it is really interesting that you chose to ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Blue Boys

    Hiya, just a very short review for you here! I enjoyed this very much. I have to say that my favourite part was the paragraph in which you described the ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: Impassioned Lesson By A Sari

    Hiya, Amelia here for a short review. I found this piece incredibly interesting to read, and enjoyed every word of it. I loved the way you described what each part ...

    Oct 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Burning Rocks

    Hiya, Amelia here with a review! I found this story beautifully sad and very interesting. All of your descriptions were amazing, and I really enjoyed the opening few paragraphs, where ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blaze

    I have to admit, after seeing the title, this story was not what I expected (in a good way)! I was pleasantly surprised by this, it was very sweet and ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Life as a Painting

    Hey, I'll be reviewing your poem today :) Firstly, I absolutely love this concept, and I really enjoyed the way you used it in this poem. There was a clear ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: She Is

    I enjoyed this story very much! The opening grabbed my attention immediately, and I found myself wanting to know what happened to the child. I found Maia's back story very ...

    Oct 21, 2016


But answer me this: how can a story end happily if there is no love?
— Kate DiCamillo, The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane