AmeliaCogin

Saving a review spot ;D

That's good for long as you're happy with it, I guess thats the most important thing! Good luck!

This was awsome! I'll be back to review later tonight for you!

Saving a review spot!

I have to go and make our dinner now, but I'll review tommorow night, promise!

Hiya mac. I'm so sorry: I completely forgot to review this chapter for you! Life is just so hectic! I PROMISE to do it later today and if I forget, ...

1) between shades of grey - ruta sypetes 2) Embers - sandor marai 3) samira and Samir - ? 4) The tales of thr otori - lian hern 5) Uncle ...

That's so much better! Seriously, I don't think I've seen a writer come back with such an improved re-write of their story. You took all the advice you were given ...

Reserving a review spot!

Saving a review space ;)

Back again...Where were we? ;) She took out 5 pieces of cloth and 2 plastic cups. Whoa - this paragraph is Far too specific. You really don't need to record ...

I'm LIKING in advance and saving myself a review spot! A full nitpick coming your way soon!

Hi! Back as promised! OK, so my thoughts and corrections are in the bold print: i. our crepe paper lungs were failing already, big breaths bottled into our grey stomachs ...

Hi upile! THanks for uploading such a great poem. It was so beautiful and it was the kind of poem that you simply can't fault was deep and rich and ...

Hello! This poem was very good. I can totally relate to fact, I think alot of teenage girls can. It's intense yet very rhythmic and moving. Brilliant work. A *like* ...