AmeliaCogin

Hello! Just a quick review. I loved this piece very, very much. As others have already commented, it is very reflective and I love that about this story. You get ...

Hi. I love this poem very much. You made use of very simplistic yet beautiful language. I like the mystery surrounding the poem...immediately the read asks so many questions regarding ...

Hello! Well I did enjoy this...I loved how apt it this day and age parents can pressure us in ways sometimes we don't like. I thought you showed that fact ...

Oh wow: this is lovely! Seriously, wow. You've taken a totally boring subject and turned it into sometiming beautiful and interesting. My fave stanza with this one ( so creative ...

Hi! Let's get straight to the review. To answer your question, no, I'm not inclined to read on, very sadly. I'm sure your storyline is good and it gets better ...

OH wow! This is so beautiful! Well done! I loved every moment of it and your grammar was perfect. No flaws so I can see! Every girl has felt this ...

Hi! The title drew me to this poem...One word: EPIC. How the heck can you have so much patience??? Well, your patience paid off. This piece of work is excellent. ...

Oh Goodness! This was beautiful from beggining to end - impecable grammar and wonderful storyline. I love it! Absolutely adore it! PLease, please, please, write more! It'd be excellent to ...

Hello! I'm Amelia and welcome to Young writers society! I enjoyed reading your piece. It was somewhat a stange concept, the devil and jesus thing, but it worked well. Perhaps ...

Hi, sorry for the small review! A bit pushed for time! I loved this poem. It's clearly been very well thought out - I can tell alot of time and ...

Hello. I agree with soulkana: this is very, very good. At first I thought, horrified, no capitals or spaces or real punctuation! But it worked. It just unexplicably worked. Great ...

Hi! WELCOME! Hope you have fun here! First of all: title: good, intruging. I like it. It drew me to your piece. I liked how you developed Bello's character: his ...

Hello! I've followed you! To the poem: It was lovely. But: I felt it started off brilliantly, yet hit the rocks half way through and kind of got a bit ...

Hi! Great poem! I really liked the message therein and the final stanza was my favorite. Here's a quick nitpick Imagine yourself here, As a raw piece of clay, Just ...

Sorry for the pithy review - a bit pushed for time -got so much revision to get done! Well, good grief! This was fantastic! I loved it! It was so ...