Amberla93

I liked this alot, just because I love the rain! :) I do hve a couple nit picks for you.. sorry. Rain drops fall outside my open window , their ...

Goodness, I know there are many people who would agree and disagree to all or parts of this poem, I liked it though. In my opinion, real music can also ...

Ello, :) I found this awesome! :) And, I agree with Kafka, it does indeed make you think after reading it. In the line: By a "large/huge/none" cloud that wants ...

Hello, Okay so,I liked this alot. (Not the subject of course, it's horrid that anyone could even think of doing that to anyone let alone a child.) But you did ...

Wow, this enchanted me, frightened me, and saddened me at the same time. I found it enchanting because of the way you worded it, I wanted to see what happened. ...

Hi there, I agree with those above me. This is powerful and so full of emotion, but the format in which it is presented distacts from that. Changing that would ...

Hello, Oh my goodness, this was so simple. Yet it has so much truth to it! I loved it. People are way too quick to judge. As for the length... ...

I liked this alot :D Sounded more like a farewell poem... Or more like The person dosent want to leave. I don't know... But I liked the way it ryhmed ...

I liked this poem alot, it shows how strong your faith is. And sometimes people (Like me) need to be reminded that God will never give us anything we cannot ...

There are no Happily Ever Afters, Fairy Tale Endings, or Once Upon a Times, if in reality there is no true love, only in myths, stories and rhymes. I loved ...

Hi, Personally, I found this entire piece amazing. The only things I would mention you editing are the same as what Ester had said. With this in mind, I would ...

Peronally, I loved the line; "At his demented words, I feel sick inside.Wanting to defend myself, but afraid to try." The poem itself is sad, but sometimes our lives are ...

I liked this, we should turn to God for all things.. But I thought I'd suggest something in the third stanza. You might want to change the first "apology" to ...

It is amazing just how quickly your feelings for someone can change. Often with no warning at all. It's hard to accept sometimes, and you always want the feeling you ...