Alvarin

Hey! Just wanted to drop a comment and say that I thought this was awesome. It captures my own thoughts and feelings so well and I might even show this ...

Thank you for the reviews ^^ I always enjoy getting one from you since you always bring up so many important and valid points. It's all going into my notes ...

Thank you so much for your reviews :3 I definitely agree with you that this chapter is lacking when it comes both to language and format. Since I'm writing this ...

This is like the nicest review I've ever gotten :D Thank you so much. I'm gonna go write some more now while I'm in a good mood ^^

Thank you for the review. I'll edit the nitpicks ^^

Thank you so much for your reviews, I really appreciate it ^^ I've decided that I should try to finish this and then go back and do some major editing, ...

Thank you so much for both reviews. I'll get working on editing at once ^^

Anytime ^^ If you have anything else you want me to review, now or in the future, put a link on my wall ;)

Thank you for the review ^^ And I don't think there's such a thing as being inexperienced, at least not when it comes to reviewing. You just blab out what ...

Will do! Thank you for all the lovely reviews :3

Thank you for the review ^^ You'll surely get more things to comment on as this moves along.. I always tend to get more and more sloppy as I move ...

I'm fixing the things you pointed out ^^ I am indeed changing the pov for the next chapter, and I'll explain a lot in that one. Thank you so much ...

Thank you for the review ^^ I've tried to fix everything you pointed out. As for the lovikka mittens, it's something one wouldn't look twice at if it was written ...

Hey again xD I'm sorry for this chapter being so confusing, but at the end of the last chapter Ryan fell and hit his head. When he wakes up he's ...

I know I shouldn't be happy about a confused reader, but since that was kind of what I was aiming for, I can't help it xD Anyway, I feel like ...