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Re: Paint
i thought this poem was very interesting and very odd at the same time for some reason. i like the flow you had going. It all fades, sooner or later. ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Dance
i've rea some good poems to day but so far your takes the cake! The music moves me, And I move it, I interpret it, Then I show you how ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: The Moon's Love Poem
im here to review tour poem and i nust say it's pretty good. Cosmic sparks of radiance, Showers of light. Gleaming and glowing, Like an endless embrace that made me ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. Rapist
Dude, i totally giving you my kudos in this poem. it was wonderful!! I hope you burn in Hell with Satan standing beside you. i thought that was awesome! i ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: KILL (part II)--contest entry
yo man this was awesome!! you did a great job on it!! the beginning was a little slow, but man didi it pick up in the end!! i tjought the ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter Twelve
Heyo!! i just read a chapter of your work and i hav to say bravo!! to tell you the truth,this is the 1st of your work i've actually read. i'm ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: terrorist?
I've never been on a camel, I've never owned a nuclear weapon. I don't own a bulletproof vest, I don't bomb random communities. Yes I pray five times a day, ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: KILL--contest entry
Dude, all i have to say is WOW. you did an awesome job on this. there wasn't one moment when i was bored or anything. but i will say that ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: the last words
you poem made me feel... a little sad but at the same time made me smile. my fav part was Too late to speak, I'm growing weak, I must be ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
i find your poem to be very funnyand well written. the flow was nice and i like the part about the cellulite Please buy some decent clothing that's in your ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye, Love
your poem was sweet as it was caring. i liked the promise you made at the end. But I'll always be waiting, your angel, your love forever. it almost made ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Freckles
damn boy yo make me wish i had freckles!! this is a sweet and beautiful. the flow was nice as was what u were using in comparison to her and ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Black Angel
i agree with what they say. just stay true to urself and always look towards the light when u need it. and as for where ur poem belongs, i thnk ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: A Bisexual High School Love Quadrilateral
to tell you the truth i thnk it's kind of bland. i mean yea, the story's there,but that's just it. i ddnt feel like it had any emotion in it. ...
Jun 9, 2011
