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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Imaginary: Part 2

    Hi, Awwww giggling!!! Okay, I'm over it! Oh, and, OMG!!! I AM THREATENING YOU TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, LOCK YOU IN A ROOM THAT ONLY HAS ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Temptation

    Hi, Job well done! There were, like, two mistakes. I think they were mistakes, but they could have been intentional. Anyways, good job. Your grammar and spelling were fine. I ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I watched my mother

    Hi, This was immensly beautiful, but it would have been even more so if it was longer. There were very few grammar mistakes, but they were there. I believe I ...

    Jun 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Fox poem

    Hi, I am confused about this poem. Farewell, A.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 1

    Hi, Honey, epilouges are at the end. :] Prolouges are at the beginning. Farewell, A.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Hidden Illusions

    Hi, Very few mistakes. Please keep writing. Farewell, A.

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Remembering Emily chapter 4 part 1

    Hi, Oh, my friend, you must hurry with that part 2. :] Haha, excellent! Uhm, a few grammatical errors and capitalization, as well as punctuation. Otherwise, it was perfect! Good ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In A World of Lost Memories

    Hi, This is really good. I don't personally like how you arranged it. Otherwise, there are no errors. Farewell, A.

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Strangest

    Hi. You forgot a few commas. Otherwise, good job. Farewll, A.

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lucky (for canislupis' contest)

    Hi, I love someone that was diagnosed with mild Asperger’s Syndrome. I know exactly what the character felt In the first part about people hardly noticing and stuff. There are ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Remembering Emily Chapter 3

    Hi, Get writing. Right now. Quit reading this and write. What are waiting for?! Go! Farewell, A.

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mirrors

    Hi, Perfect and unique. Farewell, A.

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dear Mike

    Hi, First of all....... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. that was amazing! I can't believe that I just found this! I absolutely loved this. It was fantastic. Write some more. Some detail would've been ...

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Kid of a Killer

    Hi, Many errors. Keep trying. Farewell, A.

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Untitled- Preface

    Hi, Good job! It felt like you were speaking directly to me! While I caught a few things, I hardly even recognized them. Almost completely perfect! Good work, and keep ...

    Jun 17, 2011


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