AliceFairfield

Are the animals Thomas' imaginary friends? Please correct me if I'm wrong...This is a fun short story! I really loved the theme of leaving important things behind to move forward ...

I did NOT expect Lottie to die already. And poor Hannah's been framed...I'm starting to like Amethyst, though. She seems so cool! As for mistakes, in the paragraph starting with ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong...But is this story influenced by anime to a certain degree? The way the characters speak, and the fox girl...Sorry, I might be thinking too ...

I'm not a great reviewer, but I'll try my best. Honestly, though, I don't think there's nothing much to edit here. Your writing is clear and easy to understand. I ...

I've never reviewed an essay before, but I'll do my best. First off, you're a senior movie critic? That's impressive. And this movie review essay really made me interested in ...

I'm actually not good at reviewing poems, but I'll give it a shot. Like the other reviewer said, this poem is short, so there's nothing to really criticize. Personally, I ...

Honestly, there's nothing much to edit in this chapter. Kyre's emotions are painfully clear. I was really scared he was going to hit the ground, not that landing on a ...

Please correct me if I'm wrong again...This poem is about a girl who likes living where she is, but she's had feelings for a boy with serious wanderlust, and she's ...

YWS copied my reply twice, so I deleted the second one.

There's nothing much to edit in this chapter. But perhaps the last sentence could be a bit more dramatic? Or maybe using ellipses might help it sound more alarming. And ...

YWS copied my review twice, so I deleted the second one.

I've never reviewed a rap before...I can't help but wonder what beat this uses. Anyway, the verses are powerful and clear enough to express what you're feeling, which a lot ...

The any chance, is the narrator...Anyhow, this short story is lovely. Your writing style is clear and easy to understand. The way you described the speaker's emotions is very convincing, ...

This is a great poem. The sentiments of the speaker are expressed without sounding over-sentimental. This whole work actually feels more like prose than poetry because of the structuring, but ...

I haven't read the previous chapters, but this chapter was fun to read even without any previous knowledge of the story. I liked how a large chunk of this chapter ...