AlfredSymon

Good day, Mr. Fullmetal. I wonder if you are really made up of metal. Getting back, I like your poem. But that doesn't mean I didn't see any flaw. First, ...

Hello there, Misty, so, um about your poem, "Life", well first, I liked it, but sooner or later, I found out things that I didn't like much. Somewhere to be ...

Hiya! I really like your work because of the nostalgia it brings to me... I clearly imagined your poem's essence as I've read it because I remember this same thing ...

A great poem to start the day. Morning seems afternoon-ish for me. Anyway's, kudos to your poem. I really like the style of how you wrote it. The unpredictable rhymes, ...

Hi sarebear! So about this story, I think it's actually nice. The plot, although simple, made my head turn and think about it. I reckon you based it on finding ...

I really love your intention to write a poem to a friend... I also liked your idea of happiness... The poem made me realize many things. I don't care about ...

Yippee! I think that it was really funny. Although, it has a lot of grammatical mistakes and the word choice is a bit rusty. If you can, edit it more ...

Wowee! Kudos to you. I'm very happy that someone made a poem that made me keep reading in a very fast pace. The first was Fairy Reel by Neil Gaiman. ...

Kudos to you. The one word title was very emotional and I like it, it conveys so much of your entry. The only, and very small, part I seemed to ...

Kudos to you. So this is your excuse when you arrive late, huh. How about writing some more? When I first read your poem, I thought of it as "Another ...

I HATE YOU!!!!!! Because you made me laugh in public!!!!! I was very embarrassed because your poem is too funny!!! Why do you have to be funny?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Why do you ...

Wow! What an inspirational poem. Your description of "nonsense" makes it very interesting to check out, making me check it out. So when I read it, I opened a door ...

Kudos to ya. I really like the poem. It's some kind of a vow, or promise. The contents of your poem emanates a great desire to plead for someone's promise, ...

Hiyah! Great work! Kudos to your repetition technique, especially the middle where the first line changed. I really felt your emotion in the beginning. And I really like the fifth ...

Great work Mr. Demon. What I noticed is the connection of your username with your poem. I think that's a great idea, your avatar by the way rocks in the ...