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  • Other » General, General Re: Create-a-word contest

    Word games, huh? These kind of writing activities enhance writing capabilities of writers to think creatively, it is also believed to be a brain exercise because of thinking excessively. 'nuff ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Lunatic

    Instead of putting puns and smile-o-meters, I'll be serious this time (not exactly ;) ) I understand the feeling when you feel like you don't belong, you're an alien . ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Broken

    Hi Shadow Lily! I believe Broken is as dark as your name! About Broken, I admire how you easily incorporated a song lyric with a title. It was...(emotional drum roll)...perfect ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Finding yourself

    Hey! What's with cats these days? I'm a fish person. Your poem, The One, is a very good read! Love, fear, freedom, escape; an all-in-one read huh! Here's a breakdown ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Casualties of War

    To Vietnam, Mr. Shade! To Vietnam... Hi this is Al. So I've read your work, and I found two things: A set of facts about Vietnam War and a new ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Halloween

    Hiya! Let me say this first, I think your problem is your age. I think you can sleep sounder when you're younger. Have you tried the Fountain of Youth or ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Night Life

    Good day Soccerstar! Well, well, well; we have an athlete here. I hate you, you know why? Because you made my favorite character become the killer! O come one! Anyways, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Watching Me

    Hiya! This is Al back for a review, so please don't swallow me! About the story, I really look up to you, right now, at this moment because of the ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Limerick 1

    *giggle* About your poem *giggle* Limerick 1, well it's so darn funny! It's so hard to comment on short works like this one, the reason for this is that there ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Gravedigger

    Hooray! It's time for a celebration! Bring out the confetti! No pun intended... The reason for this is that I simply love your story! The history, the plot, the coldness, ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ugly Rainbows

    Hi, it's Al again, making a review! :) I love the idea of rainbows. So I was immediately intrigued when you titled it 'ugly' And then I found out that ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The End.

    Let me begin my review of "The End" with this: I am a Catholic. The next thing I would like to say is: It is important for us to keep ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning in the Crowd

    Hi Anna! I'm here to review "Drowning in the Crowd" :) As foreshadowed by the smiley, I like your poem. You went through a timeline of events wherein love, music ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Tuesdays with Morrie: A book review

    Good Tuesday! It is Tuesday in our country today, so hi! Tuesdays with Morrie was one of my most favored books. I've read it like, I dunno, let's just say, ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    Good day! Alfred here. I like the over-all total of your work: -The structure is finely made - The words are properly chosen - The bold effects works! :) The ...

    Dec 12, 2011


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