AlfredSymon

A poem about music? Hmmm....Let's see. I like this! Really. Well the title is already great, why change it? I like slo-mo reads you know. And I think your poem ...

Hiya! Vrrroooom! The car is a great poem! I love the creative word choice and everything! The first stanza was entertaining, colorful and imaginative! Then you continue it off with ...

Greetings! I really like your name! It reminds me of cookies! I really like your poem. It tells some sort of story of spite and pain. I can feel the ...

Hiya Tiny. *giggle* ...Tiny... *giggle* Okay, so about your endearing lyric. You astounded me because of the colorful theme you put in your work. Here's a more detailed critique: Content ...

Hi! I like stars! Well, I think you just did a great job here, dear. You made a short moment go long in a slo-mo type of effect, which really ...

Hi Becca! In these kinds of articles, it's hard to make any critique because of the sincerity of your voice. I think, in here, you're not trying to make a ...

Hey, great work in this one! This is Al for your revue. Characters & Settings : :D :D :D :D You only have three characters in your play. This is ...

Hi Samii, I really love your poem Crimson Tears. It really speaks about us people as person and not viewed as anything else. You also showed the pain in love ...

A change of plans? Here's another plan, I'll comment on this piece, how's does that sound? I just want to admit that you're story is some sort of word-packed, subtle, ...

Hahaha! No I'm still sane, don't worry, I can still critique your work. Hahahahaha Ok, I'm not laughing now. I like your poem because it entails a slow-mo story. I ...

Home, sweet home, huh? Hiya this is Al, giving a Revue. About this poem: you're a great idealist because you made something which exemplifies a feeling of longing that everyone ...

Hi, Al here for a review! I like the poem 'Little Bird' in a sense that it speaks about how people today act selfish and proud, but there is nothing ...

Hi Crazed! No wonder you're works are crazy themselves ;) You're right about that girl! Where is true love these days? A few decades ago in the movie world, true ...

Bad day indeed, huh? Al here, for your Quick Critique! :D Foremost, I like your main concept because almost everyone in this site can experience this. I like the rhymes ...

Hi Toe! I have a friend named finger! Seriously.......awkward. Death's Final Claim, you said it was inspired by another piece right? It seems that that piece is a fantasy or ...