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Thank you, I'm glad you appreciated my review. ^^

Hey Morrigan, this doesn't really seem that clear to me. I'd like to see you write this again after some time has passed.

to be a haiku it would have to include something about nature, like, trees, season, etc. Otherwise it's a senryu. NOT THAT IT MATTERS, but, you know... I mean, no ...

A Senryu* about finals... >>; -hides-

I know the commas didn't get added in but I don't like to overuse them as was my habit a while ago so I feel like this looks cleaner with ...

Hey Skin, made some updates if you wanna take a look

Hey, made some updates if you wanna comment on it

Hey Skin, You're right on target about the adults just ignoring her. Basically, in overview and the chapter goes on to describe this, Erica is a forigener from the poorest ...

o.o; Wow, okay I've never actually had the experience at all so thank you for sharing! That's really helpful to know that I got it right XD. Basically I wrote ...

Yes, I think it does.

For future use: You can contact a mod and we'll mark it as a review for you if it has the right word count

Hey Alice, if you're serious about that then you can always post your work here: instead of looking for reviews.

Yeah, we have different dictionaries. Mine tends to be google, but I have such strong denotations and connotations with this particular word I never bothered looking it up. Google says ...

Alright! I cleaned it up

XD Thank you so much for your help with this. I really appreciate the review. It made me smile. Hell, I'm still grinning