Aley

Thanks so much for the review! I'm really happy you answered my questions and that gave me a very clear picture of what you're thinking about the poem. I'll check ...

I kind of saw it as a murder of a family...; I guess I didn't say that right XD Sorry, I'm tired DX

I think it's interesting that everyone seems to think that the lover is the metaphor for lip balm when the lip balm was actually the metaphor for my relationship. It's ...

Thank you for the review on my poem. I checked out a lack of capitalization and I decided it was too informal for what I wanted, so I tried to ...

Thank you so much for the review!

I'm glad I was able to help

You dont have any stars... oh look, you have done 33 reviews but you have no stars... how did that happen? I am going to go check that out...

Okay, so 1) I mean your writing is a little jarring because of things that need editing like the phrases that seem off like the ones I pointed out. Those ...

Mm, well I can understand you want her feelings on the drive there since it builds her character a little, but I'm not sure why you felt you needed to ...

Ohhhhhhh, I see what you mean. Yeah, you can do that if you jump into present, but you can't go back and forth. Like, if you hit a chapter where ...

Well usually in novels it's a 'pick one' choice, so if you are trying to write in present tense, then change everything to present tense. If not, then change it ...

I don't care about having notifs. By all means, notif away

Ohhh, I wouldn't discount you like that. This is a good poem. Enter into the competition and see how you do.

*raises both hands*