Aley

You have the fun and positive down, now apply consistency to it that you usually have and you'll be golden!

XD Thank you DragonLily. Shaken, yes, total typo. I don't even know how I got from shaken to skanen...

Hi Natasha! Thank you for your review, I'd just like to point out that after e. e. cummings in the course of American Poetry, the rule to always have a ...

Hey! You're right my formatting was off for the one break. I had instead of using paragraph markers. About i, I'd can't see what you're going for but if you ...

XD Thank you! I totally took that idea and ran with it. I think you'll like the changes ^.-

Hey! I took your suggestions and I think I made this quite a bit better. Check it out please?

Yeah, a bit. The line's a little long and more figurative than reality like the other one, but better. XD -#neversatisfied-

Shift the appropriate points into lower case, but not necessarily all of it, yeah. Working on making a poem rhyme better is pretty hard, so I'm not really worried about ...

Alright. I'll try something else to see if I can convey what I was going for with the italics and bold first letter. Thanks for being honest. You shouldn't have ...

This is not a review Hey Min, I can see you don't want a review on your writing, so I'm not going to do that, instead I'm going to take ...

Wow! That made a huge difference in the clarity of the poem and really getting into the personal attitude that I was hoping for! The multiple stanzas actually really helped ...

Hello Nate! My name's Aley and I'm here to comment today. First of all I'd like to say that you did a really good job out of bold, but I ...

Well the direction really depends on how you're drawing. If you're going for a smooth look, it might be best to crosshatch instead of just picking one direction, so going ...

Not to argue, but I suppose to clarify my meaning, conjunctions are okay at the beginning, yes, but you have to have two conjoined parts in order for it to ...

Of course! I'll be happy to look at another one.