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I'm going to write you a review for the sake of review day based on the audio link and doing reviews on lyrics as poems for my blog so I've ...

Hello AvantCoffee, Sorry for the late reply to your review request, but here it is! Overall, the flow of this piece is really good. I got caught up on "I ...

Yo! Sorry for the late review but you requested it and I'm giving it! Since it's been a while I'm going to give a general style critique. First up, The ...

Hey Clarity, I like the poem but I really feel like I don't understand the point of it. I mean, obviously there's a point here, we've got this woman in ...

Hey TiffanyToy, welcome to YWS! First thing first, I can see that you're relatively new to posting works on YWS, perhaps just re-joining? So I'm going to review your poem ...

Hey Pacific2016, Welcome to Review Days on YWS! Review day is a 24 hour window where YWS teams up together to try to clean the Green Room where all works ...

Heeeey LadyBird, here for another review. This one has a lot more substance then the other one I reviewed. I feel like there's more going on here in your head ...

Hey LadyBird! You're going to review my poom for KotGR stuff, so here I am. I'm not reading all of these, just the last two parts in the Green Room, ...

Hi, so I'm not going to go quite as in-detail as your last reviewer. I'm going to approach this as a reader who's reviewing within 30 minutes, not highlighting things ...

So, with only having the summary up above to go by, this seems like a really cool murder story. I mean, we have an obvious murder from this point of ...

Um, okay, wow, Lots of feelings. Hi Snazzy! This would be an amazing spoken word poem, but it comes off kind of shouty as a written one o.o; First off, ...

Hey LadyBird! I thought I'd knock out three birds with one stone! Namely, I thought I'd review a mentor for a lot of words in a new critique pattern! Woot ...

Hey SergeantRosie! Aley here to give you a review this Review Day. First off, I have to say that it's really ambitious to try to make a manga, I love ...

Hey SilverFox, So, A lot of my feedback is going to be horse related because, um, I like to ride? I haven't ridden in a while, but I feel like ...

Hello Aranya! As you didn't specify what type of review you'd like, I'll just do my typical style of review for you! First off, welcome to YWS, I'm glad to ...