Alexcarmine58

Thanks for reviewing and critiquing my poem. I appreciate it alot.

I forgot to make this under a review so i resent it.

I really liked the message of the poem and how marketing and retail are currently. The poem while short still delivers a powerful message. I also find the lines of ...

This was an amazing poem. I loved the rhymes and formating you used. This also poem used awesome imagery. In addition I like the italics it adds a nice touch ...

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. I like the point it makes that there more to the world that meets the eye. I also like the final line " and for ...

Really enjoyed the poem it flowed well and had a good message.