Alainna

This was very good, I loved the last two ends the poem well. I didn't quite get this: my sweet lady friend I'm not sure that it fitted the piece... ...

I really like this, it's meaningful. I really liked this: We think the dark is at its end, But find it finds us once again. Any chance of this being ...

Ahh, sweet. Could there be more to this? Great work, Alainna xxxx

Wow. I LOVED this. You can relate to it, it's short and to the point, it's well written. Great stuff, Alainna xxxxxx

This was great, very emotive. I like your style of writing. I can't wait for chapter 2.... Alainna xxxx

I have to agree, the way that he killed off those characters with the whole pit thingy was a bit of an anticlimax. It's true, this series does stick in ...

That was evil...but great. I liked the way you described Jaime as thinking he was running away. Could there have been even more emotion? Maybe? Fantastic, Keep going, Alainna xxxxxxxxx

I really liked this piece... it flowed perfectly!! Great Work, Alainna xxxxxxx

I have to agree with Taiven, the second book is the best. Will is also my favourite character as he is from our world and his story is the one ...

I do not base this at all on how easy a book is or how long or anything like that. I base this completely on how much I LIKE a ...

I liked this. The theme was real and well interpreted. The repetition works well but it could be even better if it was slightly longer!! Great work, Alainna xxxxxxxxxxx

Wow. I loved this!!!! :D Great work, Alainna xxxxxxxx

Lol...It's gonna be at least a week......soz. I'll try and get it done soon...... Thanks, Alainna xxxxx

oooooooooh. I liked this!! :D What genre of music would this be? As for a title I reckon 'Demons' would kinda be cool... Alainna xxxxxxx

Hiya! Erm.....I agree with magyk, some of the sentences didn't make sense. It was quite gruesome, yet in a clean , clear manner. This made it intriguing. I could see ...