Alainna

I'm glad that Amber is back. Jamie needs some support. I really liked that installment; it was....different. And in a good way!!! :D I got a little confused with the ...

Another fantastic chapter JC! *Hugs POD* Finally she turned and walked back out the door, leaving her mother behind. "Jamie-" Mary called out. Jamie was already out the door and ...

Another fantastic piece Meevs! I knew from Sappy that sure did put girl's in terrible moods. For some reason that just doesn't sound right. It goes kinda wobbly at 'that'. ...

Ok, this was good, slightly typical and very YA but there were some really good parts. One thing you should know about summer school was that they had the same ...

YAY!!! POD!! I was starting to miss it!! This was as great as ever, the court room is becoming more and more real. The half-hour passed surprisingly quickly as the ...

*Hides tissue and wipes eyes quickly*. I feel like you can only ever write something that true and emotive if you yourself have been through something traumatic. Maybe I'm wrong?? ...

This is great JC, are you thinking of publishing? The last line was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Erm, nothing but praise from me today! :D So I'm off to read the next part! ...

This was another good piece. I love your cliffhanger endings! This confused me: I was starting to feel nauseous being in this House and Garden after home. Were you trying ...

Nooooooo, Steve!!! I like Chris!! Well, despite the whole rape thing in the past and all that...*sigh*. Jamiy is becoming very....sarcastic and has developed a slight attitude lately..I think it ...

I was momentarily confused with who you were talking about because I didn't realize that Rick was a nickname for Patrick!!! Duh!!! Ok, I liked this part but I think ...

OK, this was good, but not really much to it.... I think you could really have joined chapters 2 & 3 together seems as they are both not from Corrie's ...

Hi Gen!! I found this part much better than the first as it had more dialouge in it. I like Kaia but I want there to be something more about ...

HeHe, JC!!! It's an English thing 'Cor'. Kinda like an exclamation. :D Ok, Meevs, I liked this and I liked the way it led onto Rob. It made the whole ...

The idea behind this was good, and I do like the Blue and Gold thing but it didn't work as well as it could. The repetition lacked structure and therefore ...

Found it!!! I hunted this part down..... This was good, more action and a little more suspense which I like! "Yup,"Patrick... 'Rick', said, "set us up." Not to sure about ...