Alainna

From what I started to read of this I reckon it's fairly good- and I would have liked to read the whole thing. However, I could only read half before ...

Hey Steve, I actually really liked the fight- your writing came alive at that point. The man walked down the street slowly, villagers avoided him because of his sword and ...

Hm.....I know you asked me to review this but all I can say is there hardly is anything to review. All I can do is echo what the others have ...

I enjoyed reading this as the imagery and ideas were nice, simple and well written. Tear faced, he buried his head, In his arms. This is OK as it is, ...

Aw, this was really fitting to your story and I could hear it as a chant. Smelly powder, stinky dusty-dust, Slows the chant down. I think 'dust' will do fine. ...

Now, I didn't think it was possible for a piece based around monsters in the basement to scare me. But it did. And I will tell you why, Es. The ...

Mmm.....I really liked the imagery you used in this- however, I think it would suit better to a prose than to a poem. There wasn't really a rhythm to this ...

This book looks interesting- I should put it on my 'To Read' list. It could really help with my Sociologist mind. (Exploring gender roles in society...etc...) I wonder though, is ...

Penguin hit the nail on the head. Despite your lovely voice and good dialouge, I just found it so hard to follow. In the begging I thought the left-behind-person was ...

"Alice in Wonderland/Through the Looking-Glass" by Lewis Carroll. Whatever Carroll was smokin', I hope it hasn't lasted through the years. :P Agreed. I liked them....but they were weird. Gotta love ...

SUMI!!! Here is your crit! Overall, this was a good, calming piece of poetry that had flow, but not much structure. I like the fact that you write poetry about ...

I actually really enjoyed that- a surprise as I generally don't read Fantasy. I found it intriguing. Have you written more? she laughed with glee as the multicolored sparks, in ...

Good as usual but this piece had a few faults. Firstly, this part was very short. Not much really happened and I've found some of the past pieces more gripping. ...

I liked how easily you describe situations; how you can make every sentence so perfectly poetic. But for a moment I turned my back The 'but' seems out of place. ...

Ah, this was good, I enjoyed the conflict in this piece. Leaning up lightly, I placed a gentle kiss upon his cheek; lingering for that moment when the reciever tenses ...