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Re: My Body Whole
good morning, afternoon, or evening!! I'm only reading poems for today and waiting for my school year to end so I may read other writer's novels and short stories. plus, ...
Feb 17, 2025 -
Re: Happy.
Hello!! this is AkuRashomon, checking in this site again because I want to seek inspiration to write hehe and @Nikkythecatlover12 has been the lucky one I'm reviewing today. this piece ...
Feb 17, 2025 -
Re: See Through Closet (a poem about the desire to come out.)
Hello! This is Aku and I am here to write you an opinion/ comment or a review for your writing. It seems more like a short story than a poem ...
Nov 24, 2024 -
Re: four letters to four people i've learned to call a family
Hello! I am AkuRashomon. I think this poem is so so cute! It has some traits I like in poems: it paints pictures, metaphorically real, quite relatable in some way, ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: angels
Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to review/comment of a poem that depicts a person who wishes and prays for a wonderful person or an angel to appear ...
Jul 19, 2024 -
Re: Shadow of the Flame
Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a review/ comment for your work. I love this work, it is a great showcase of a ex-friend that used ...
May 7, 2024 -
Re: A kind of loneliness
Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment. I love your avatar btw, is it your own art? Where am I? -- those are the ...
May 6, 2024 -
Re: Ch 1 -The Excitement
Hello, I am AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment for your first short story posted on YWS. Also, welcome to YWS! If you need help, you ...
May 4, 2024 -
Re: Catching Feelings for Someone Who's Not Mine
Hiiiiii, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a mere review/comment. I have class in 30 minutes How is it possible that I almost caught feelings for someone ...
May 2, 2024 -
Re: Outlier
hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment for your piece. Warm light on linoleum floors And candied sweets resting on paper plates The blending ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: The monster within | Chapter Six |
Hello! This is AkuRashomon and I do know it has been awhile since I have reviewed or commented on your work. But to be honest, I love this novel(?) you ...
Apr 30, 2024 -
Re: 5 ways i committed suicide
Hello, this is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your work. First of all, I do think the formatting can make the story pretty confusing. I ...
Apr 28, 2024 -
Re: The World Around Us
Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your poem. This reminds me of my bathroom thoughts while the shower runs cold and noisy, tapping ...
Apr 28, 2024 -
Re: Chat Rooms (Part 1?)
Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give you a review/comment of your work. This konda reminds me of the chat room in YWS, lol. I have seen ...
Apr 28, 2024 -
Re: The Light of Day
Hello, this is AkuRashomon who is going to drop a review/comment about your piece. So, let's get started! I like the flow of how your poem goes. The rhyming patterns ...
Apr 27, 2024