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Hello! This is Aku and I am here to write you an opinion/ comment or a review for your writing. It seems more like a short story than a poem ...

Hello! I am AkuRashomon. I think this poem is so so cute! It has some traits I like in poems: it paints pictures, metaphorically real, quite relatable in some way, ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to review/comment of a poem that depicts a person who wishes and prays for a wonderful person or an angel to appear ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a review/ comment for your work. I love this work, it is a great showcase of a ex-friend that used ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment. I love your avatar btw, is it your own art? Where am I? -- those are the ...

Hello, I am AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment for your first short story posted on YWS. Also, welcome to YWS! If you need help, you ...

Hiiiiii, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a mere review/comment. I have class in 30 minutes How is it possible that I almost caught feelings for someone ...

hello, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give you a review/comment for your piece. Warm light on linoleum floors And candied sweets resting on paper plates The blending ...

Hello! This is AkuRashomon and I do know it has been awhile since I have reviewed or commented on your work. But to be honest, I love this novel(?) you ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your work. First of all, I do think the formatting can make the story pretty confusing. I ...

Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your poem. This reminds me of my bathroom thoughts while the shower runs cold and noisy, tapping ...

Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give you a review/comment of your work. This konda reminds me of the chat room in YWS, lol. I have seen ...

Hello, this is AkuRashomon who is going to drop a review/comment about your piece. So, let's get started! I like the flow of how your poem goes. The rhyming patterns ...

Hey, this is AkuRashomon and I am here to give a little comment or review. First of all, I do like the neatness of each verse and I like the ...

Hello, I am here to send a review/comment about your poem. Merci is a beautiful word yet you make it more beautiful writing this piece. The first line made an ...